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02:そんな彼自身は残念なことにもう二十歳から先へ進むことはないけど She’s saying the artist hasn’t done anything worth mentioning after turning 20. Emphasis on being older than 20. This line is important because on the next page, Sensei says she made it sound LIKE he was gonna die after turning 20.